First Draft Feedback

I have now completed my first draft and shown it to my class. I have done this not only to get feedback in general but also due to the fact that the majority of my class fit the demographic of my trailer. I have been given feedback of which I will use for my next draft in order to make a fuller narrative and a more appropriately conventional trailer for my genre.

We were given constructive feedback, both positive and negative and I will use this to improve my next draft:

Positives:

•Good handheld 'rec' shots

•Title appearing randomly was good.

•Cuts on music worked well.

•Music was suitable to genre.

•Interesting titles and fonts.

•Good shot at the beginning.

•Good effects

•Good camera angles

•Good location

•Effective 'fuzz'

•Full of enigma's

•Non diegetic sound was good

•Very dramatic

•Appropriate for Target Audience

•Good reversing shot at the end.

Negatives:

•Title font needs improvement

•Title itself might not be to do with genre

•Needs more long shots to show setting more.

•Some shots need to be a bit longer.