Second Draft feedback and 05-16th March

I have now completed my second draft and have showed it to my class. They have given me postivie and negative feedback of which I will act upon in order to make my third and final piece successful.

Positive Feedback

• 'Found footage' are effective.
• Clear genre.
• Characters fit the target audience.
• Range of shots.
• Good voice over
• good choice of location.
• Good use of forest scenes.
• Effective flash backs
• Realistic.
• Good on-screen graphics
• Use of ouija board.
• Edited well.
• Good iconography
• Good actors.

Negative Feedback

• Unclear narrative.
• The title doesnt fit the genre and the trailer.
• Poor voice over.
• editing is bland.

For these two weeks,  I have been perfecting my final draft. I have now watched even more trailers and have realised that the majority of them show a clear narrative for the entire film, of which mine didn't. Therefore me and my partner have fully noted the narrative that will take place through the entire film and have added even more shots and editing to make this seem effective. Due to the negative feedback given for the second draft, me and my partner decided to partially re-film the content we have so far in order to make the narrative more enigmatic but remotely clear at the same time. Not only will these be easier for us to do but hopefully it will be a more effective production in the long run. In the next couple of days, I will be do finalisation to all of my work for the pre-production piece in order to entail that it makes sense for our third and final draft.